Friday, November 14, 2008

Void

Empty spaces
Empty cases
Empty cages
Violent rages

Vacant lots
Vacant plots
Vacant looks
Hidden nooks

Placid lakes
Placid flakes
Placid thoughts
Iron wroughts

Their void is felt
The feeling dealt
In the midst of the breaking dawn
empty spaces linger on.

2 comments:

  1. very reminiscent of everything is broken..good otherwise!

    ReplyDelete
  2. that was my inspiration... dylan is god..

    ReplyDelete